What my professor wants For further revision, please consider: 1. Will you be able to make your transition smoother and more coherent? I understand you need to present different opinions, but constant repetitions hurt the skillful tone in your writing. You might want to reframe some expressions in the writing. 2. Your research question is broad, I am wondering if you can make your research more specific, e.g. just ask students/parents about their views on life and work. If you just say an example of employers, the population that constitutes employers might be too diverse so the conclusion cannot be reduced to a general summary. 3. You also have some minor grammatical issues, e.g. capitalization, punctuation.Research Paper for the week
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