Editing

The paper is not in MLA format.  You need a header. You need to indent paragraphs. Use your textbook to help with this and other aspects of MLA format. The introduction does not follow assignment instructions. You are missing a clear thesis and/or your thesis does not follow module instructions. Use the module pages and the textbook to help you write a thesis statement. Do not refer to the thesis in the thesis. You must refer back to the speaker and the talk every time you use information from the talk. (see sample essays) You should use the speaker’s last name in your introductory phrases.  . [The word bullying is not a proper noun and should not begin with a capital letter. You will need to fix this error throughout the essay.] https://www.ted.com/talks/shane_koyczan_to_this_day_for_the_bullied_and_beautiful